I love da face. Looks super cool! But for whatever the reason, the lineart in the armor looks weaker. Hatching seems weird and flat in general. Looks like it goes in all directions ... wich is the same as not going in any direction. That kinda kills the piece. I strongly suggest to aply the textures and hatchings in one only direction, trying to shade and not only fill in space. If you try to aply the hatching with a lil more 3D in future pieces, I think it could look great!!!